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Maybe

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Maybe saying I love you
is no more or less than saying
I am alive
or saying
I believe in God,

because really, God has opened His heart like a teapot
and poured me full of hot-chocolate-melted love,
stirring me with a life-spoon until
liquid beauty spills down my sides, flowing its way to your lips.

Maybe that's not enough,
and all this God-sourced waterfall
isn't enough to satisfy us

because still I want to dance around streetlights and palm trees,
singing a tune I composed while watching your fingers.
And still I want to wrap
a lip glossed smile, a handful of raindrops,
a library shelf and thirty-two poems
in shiny white tissue-paper
and slide it under your door at midnight.

And maybe,
                                though we crave to give more
                                and come up with nothing but

ourselves, over and over again –

               that is enough.
Entry for the `ArtistsForCharity Valentine's Day competition.
This piece is rather self-explanatory :)

Edit 30/1/06 - just a bit of formatting I missed.

Edit 22/3/09 - major revision. Critique is appreciated. :)
© 2006 - 2024 arliddian
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nathan-speaks's avatar
Arliddian,

I would like very much to read the original version of this poem, if you still have it - it would be interesting to see how your style and thoughts have changed.

Best wishes
Nathan