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Fear of flight
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With gingered fingers, I touch your shoulders,
afraid they might erupt with wings.
What use is the love of a girl
to a bird; the gravity-bound
to the sky?
afraid they might erupt with wings.
What use is the love of a girl
to a bird; the gravity-bound
to the sky?
Written 8/4/09; revised 24/4/09.
I am unsure about this. Does it seem unfinished? Would love to hear what you think.
I am unsure about this. Does it seem unfinished? Would love to hear what you think.
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I love this. It sounds finished to me, and very lovely.